Hi everyone today's task was about spies for this piece of work I did I would actually say it wasn't that hard have you ever wondered that your parents might be spies?
Friday, April 24, 2020
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Hi Olivia, it is Ella
ReplyDeleteI really like your spies story, I found it really cool.
maybe next time you could add a bit more writing,
but overall I really liked it.
thank you for your feedback Ella
ReplyDeleteKIa ora Olivia
ReplyDeleteWow imagine if your parents really were spies? Sometimes you do have to be a bit of a spy as a Mum. I liked how you stood on the rubber duck in your story so your parents heard you. Remember to proof read your writing for punctuation too.
Hi,Olivia.
ReplyDeleteI really like but you can maybe try and add a little more writing but it is really good you could read it really good. In my opinion i really like it!!!