The story is called pigeon Impossible it is about a pigeon a case and a man called Walter Beckett I had a lot of trouble writing this story so I had to go to my mum a lot of times Have you ever made a news report.
Tuesday, April 14, 2020
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Hi Olivia
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job for someone who had a lot of trouble! One thing I thought would improve your post was to have done the tile for that it stood out a bit more. BREAKING NEWS! Also remember to use capitals, and maybe put less on each slide. I enjoyed reading your breaking news though. Look forward to reading more post from you Olivia! Mrs Pascoe
Sorry, I meant the title, not tile!
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feed back and next time I will make some changes
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