Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, November 22, 2019
pineapple lumps
Hi my name is Olivia and I wrote a speech about why pineapple on pizza is good.When I read my speech in class I persuaded quite a lot of people . so now I'm here to try and persuade to you pineapple is good to have on pizza.
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I liked the way you told us to close our eyes and imagine the pizza coming out. You have persuaded me that pineapple should go on pizza because i don't like it on pizza. It is really cool that it can stop you from getting cancer.
ReplyDeleteYour slide was so good it made me hungry for pineapple on pizza well done. You taught me that pineapple on pizza can save me from cancer. Well done.
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