Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, April 2, 2019
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi olivia, it it is jessi and I like the part when you said that hi I am really hungry. And it reminded me of when I say it to my dad. Maybe you can put more stuff like put more food and people?
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia
ReplyDeleteI like your burger and how you made the Mcdonalds, maybe next time you could correct your spelling.
Zara