The big crash

Hello today I will be putting on my blog, a story called the big crash. In my last post was my planning for this story. First is planning next is the story and then the editing and revising and finally publishing I found it hard to swap out my words into better words but now my whole story is better please tell me in the comments if I need to do something better or change something about it.

Planning

Today Mr Sutherland's class have been working on our planning. And so I took a picture and put it on a slide we had about half an hrs time to finish it and to put it on our blog. In my actual story I will write it more descriptively please tell me if I made any mistakes.

Hello everyone I made a slide with some interesting facts about about Dove Cameron. And you will find out some information about Dove Cameron on my slide, it was a tiny bit hard but I did it and I'm proud so I hope you like my slide what celebrity would you do for something like this ?please comment if I need to change anything please.